Toweroflove (Re-review)
1:07 p.m. - 2005-07-11
One of the worst people I have reviewed, twice. Is never happy even when I am stating the obvious. Beware.
Username and title: Toweroflove - The Essence (re-review) - I still like the username, it reminds me of that song ’The power of Love’. The Essence, although relatively simple is quite fitting. Technically a person’s essence should be portrayed in a diary. (10/10)
First Impression: This template doesn‘t fit my common 800x600 resolution. (0/5)
Template: Simple, but the image is WAY too big. When I fist came onto your page, all I could see was the top of the image. Downsize it by at least 50% if not 100%. The links are OK but would look better if capitalized. I see what you are trying to do with the positioning, but having them straight might look better. I also like the font. (10/20)
Content: You have definitely matured as a writer from the last time you were reviewed here, but you are still daylogging all the time. I got bored really fast because you are basically writing a weblog, not a diary. When I last reviewed you I found you very hypocritical, because in one breath you would go on about the unfairness of your life, but in the other quote the bible. Fortunately you aren’t doing either of these anymore. I think you need to open up instead of just recounting what you did in the day; using names and places I have never heard of. You have come far, but still have far to go. I don’t think you have found your style yet. (25/40)
Links: Your extras and the random link on your archive page are broken. (0/5)
Extras: Link is broken, so cannot give any points here. (0/5)
Stalkability: Fine. (5/5)
Lasting Impression: Well you have definitely made more of an impression than your last review. But you still have far to go. You’ll get there eventually. (4/5)
Will I come back? Maybe. (4/5)
Do you have the Dudette factor? (Ungraded) Undecided.
Total- 58/100- 58%
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