tracey-face
7:16 p.m. - 2004-09-26
Username and title: %%diary-tracey-face%%- Everybody else’s girl... - I love the title. It is so warming to the heart. I am not so keen on Tracey-face though; it wouldn’t make me click. It makes me think 12 year old than adult. (5/10)
First Impression: Pretty tidy (10/10)
Template: I don‘t usually like dark templates like this, because they are usually combined with a terrible image. But I actually really like yours and the fact that it is imageless. Even though the writing is a bit small, the colour of the main text is nice, and is very striking against the black. The greeny colour could be nicer, as it clashes a little with the main text. I like that the links are separated too, although not capitalized. You are nicely archived. Something that I am particular about. (20/30) Content: I am very much interested in your life. I enjoy the complexity and almost film pitch-like style of your entries. Maybe it is your age, but the maturity or your writing is most certainly worth the net space it uses. I agree about being 13 again. Even tough I am 17, 13 seems like a million miles away.
Your spelling and punctuation appear fine. All of your writing appears fine. More than fine. (60/60) Links: Maybe your could condense them down, by adding some of them to the extras. (5/10) Stalkability: Notes, AIM, Guestbook, E-mail. Think about making a contact page. (9/10) Lasting Impression: I liked it. (10/10) Extras: A nice variety. (5/5) Will I come back? Yeah (5/5) Do you have the Dudette factor? (Ungraded) Yes Total- 133/150 You are able to join the dudettestar 100+ ring
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