xlxclownxlx
9:56 p.m. - 2004-09-29
Username and title: %%diary-xlxclownxlx%%- I really, really, really like clowns - OK, so I am sensing a clown theme? A bit on the silly side, but you are all in the same theme. (5/10)
First Impression: Like the profile! (10/10)
Template: I am assuming that you made this yourself? The picture has the cool factor, but lets face it, if you want your diary to be taken seriously, you need to seriously overhaul. There are so many other colours other than Grey as a background, and it could be overall a bit classier. What I do like is the boldness of the links at the bottom. Clear and concise. I also like the way the title is always ’The great debate about...’ See if you can find a clown template. You will probably have to think about customs, or generally just get a better picture. No disrespect to your art though. (10/30)
Content: I read entries from all the months I could see. I was expecting the type of entries I saw, which are basically short entries, which don’t really have a point. There were a few, like your poems and a rant. Apart from this, I really couldn‘t find anything I enjoyed reading. I see that from the “Change“ entry that things do get a bit better from there. The bits about Bush are interesting, probably because my family are not at all political.
Well let’s just say that your earlier entries saved you on this review, because they are a tiny bit more interesting. I am also confused as to why you have one entry with a totally different template to the rest of your diary.
Your spelling could be better, as could your punctuation. We can‘t all be perfect. You did however, admit that you can‘t spell, you kudos to you for the honesty. (20/60)
Links: As far as I can see you have no broken links. (10/10)
Extras: Cast, surveys, Buddylist, picture, why you like clowns. The only downside is that they are very brief. (4/5)
Stalkability: Notes, Guestbook, and E-mail. Put your notes link on your contact page, and maybe write your email and YIM as contact links. Look into a Guestbook. (5/10)
Lasting Impression: Don't get me wrong, as a person, you are cool. As a diarist, especially the type that you would review, you need to seriously revamp this. In my opinion, I don’t think you should be getting reviews. You obviously write for yourself and friends, and not to bear your soul. Maybe you should think about why you are actually requesting. (8/10)
Will I come back? Probably. When I feel like being mad (5/5)
Do you have the Dudette factor? (Ungraded) Yes, but only because of your randomness.
Total- 77/150
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